The Unforgettable date (Beautiful dating)

The day was felt different...
The day where we met...
To open our hearts...

Your smile welcomed me...
Made me not the power...
To hide the feeling...

The day you were very pretty...
Your hair that was long and black...
Really was harmonious with thy skin that was white...

Until the wind became stopping blew...
As though being enchanted with your beauty...
And rain also descended...
As though not wanting us to end this meeting...

It really was an unforgettable date...
I hope all that was the beginning...
For our love story that was eternal...
Till the end of later.

27 comments:

fitRi said...

ehm...ehm..indahnya...:)
serasa dunia milik berdua
isinya memuji...
hehehhe

ieyaz said...

ciee..ciee...
co cweetnyaa...
heheee.. :D

kebookyut said...

prikitiew.... =)

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

eheem.eheem...rambutnya panjang dan hitam nih yee..hehehe

Lilah said...

So Sweet....semoga memang ini awalnya, untuk menjadi sesuatu yg indah menemani hidupmu selamanya..

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Lilah : amiin :)
@Fanny : ehm juga hehehe
@Kebo : suwiwit :)
@Ieyaz : top dah pokoknye :)
@Fitri :bener gak ada org lain pokoknya hehehe

ا شين said...

lagi mikirmikir, siapakah cewek yang berambut panjang ntu... hehehehe

ciklik said...

romantis, indah, zeep nian dah. brrasssa..

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Achen : mmmm siapa ya hehe
@Buwel alias ciklik : berasa cinta ye hahaha

AeArc said...

hikz..

Seiri Hanako said...

so sweet...
aulawi gitu lho

(^__^)

exort said...

amiiinnnn
semoga langgeng n jangan lupa kirim undangan n tiket pp ke gw ya hehehe

elok langita said...

everlasting love eternal life.. :D

AISHALIFE-LINE said...

what about her eyes,bro?I mean what's color?hehe

om rame said...

suit... suit...
romantisnya, ckckckck.
Lanjutkan deh sampai jenjang berikutnya.

Arif Chasan said...

huaaaahhhh.......... melow...

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

he he he..setuju dg pertanyaan aisha. hehhe.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Arif : melow2an hehe
@Om rame : lanjutkan :)
@Aisha : she have brown eyes sist :)
@Elok : Hmmm :)
@Exort : amiin juga, wau tiket PPnya nih yg berat wkwkkwkwkw
@Seiri : tq :)
@AeArc : kenape nangis :)
@Fanny : brown eyes :)

Elsa said...

ehm ehm,,,,

BABY DIJA said...

Om..mana empek empeknya???
tapi Dija belom punya gigi Om...
hehehee

inge / cyber dreamer said...

prikitiiiiuwwww...

indah banget tulisan ini ^^

om rame said...

kaLo Lagi daLam kondisi seperti itu serasa dunia miLik berdua, yang Lain pada ngontrak. hehehe...

Arif Chasan said...

hehe...
pagi melow... ^_^

imtikhan said...

pagi sobatku
berkunjung nich
selamat beraktifitas
terima kasih

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Tikhan : oke tq :)
@Arif : kok melow hehehe
@Om rame : bener banget :)
@Inge : tq :)
@Dija : ya udah utk tante elsa aja hehe
@Elsa : Ehm juga :)

Zulfadhli's Family said...

Hihihihi, jadi pengen tau puisinya nih menggambarkan cewe Uncle yang mana?? :-)

Aulawi Ahmad said...

hehehe ini yang baru sist :)

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