The man with the hay hat

Jerry from kemanx921

The man with the hay hat…
He sing a song…
In the lonely night…

Playing an old guitar…
The sky as a musical notes…
And the star as the chord…

Humming a longing…
That flow with the breeze...
Unburden his mind
In dead earnest

A yearning for someone …
That will never blow over

Then...
With the song...
He want break through the time…
To satisfy his desire...

Although...
It's only to see her smile.


#Synopsis: Tentang sebuah kerinduan yang tak tertahan :)

#Idioms :
unburden his mind = mengungkapkan rasa
in dead earnest = dengan sepenuh hati

blow over = reda/usai

29 comments:

Himi^^ said...

ecciee yg lagi rindu.. ~__~

aahaha :D

Annesya said...

waduh... semakin romantis... :)

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

keren keren...ada gambarnya lagi ya. sip sip....

Naturalzine said...

weees . . . romantika rindu menggelora..hehehe..pissss

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@N = ini symbol kerinduan :)
@Fanny = itu kan si jerry hehehe
@Anne : karnamu aku begitu :)
@Himie : itu symbol kerinduan :)

Annesya said...

hauuu jadi maluuuu *naruh tangan di bawah dagu*

H. Nizam said...

Missing someone we love can make us very dizzy.

Imtikhan said...

wow asyik nich :)

naturalzine said...

singgah lagi disini sobat :)

indofreeadsDOTus said...

OMG thats good poem...

muarra said...

waw puisinya keren nie,, i like it,,, and i follow u now,,,

Clara Canceriana said...

terbayang langsung sosok si pria memakai topi ini kkk~

NURA said...

asalamualaikum
fun playing the old guitar
add a romantic lover when in addition there

octarezka said...

siapa yang pemilik senyum itu??
:D

obat herbal liver said...

lah teu ngarti sia teh ngomong naon atuh

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Elsa said...

agak bingung dengan puisinya kali ini

:(

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Abbigayle : U r welcome :)
@Obat : sok teu sami2 belajar atuh :)
@Rez : seseorang disana :D
@Nura : yes he is a romantic guys :D
@CC ; hehehe
@muarra : :)
@Imtikhan : tq :)
@H. Nizam : yes U right sir :)
@Anne : sini cubit dikit pipinya hihihihi

Rezki Nuarta said...

ohh man that remind me with someone

belajar komputer said...

wow keren banget puisinya (lagunya) dan gambarnya juga lucu.... thank

Aulawi Ahmad said...

BK : ini bukan lagu bro ;) tq b4 :)
@Rezki : nah moga terobati rindunya :)
@Elsa : memang ada beberapa bait yg kubuat berupa symbol :)

SANG PEMBELAJAR said...

Nice Post Sob...
Wah... ini puisi ya?? :D
Absen perdana, skalian mau share MP3 Kisah Motivasi Bag. IX
Mohon direview Sob... Thx
Salam bLogger, :)

Ajeng Sari Rahayu said...

hiks, mengharukan Wi :(

bagusnya gambar di atas itu Wi >.<

Diana Cooper said...

Very nice! Have a great day :)

Linda said...

I really like this gentle poem. It has some lovely observations. You have a unique voice - so important in poetry.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Linda : tq Linda, I really appreciated that :)
@Diana : Tq Diana, hv great day too :)
@Ajeng ; :)
@SP : ya :)

Mr.odoy said...

truly beautiful poetry

Ulan News said...

wow keren bgt puisi na sob :D

Senja Berita said...

nice puisinya, bgus bgt, salam kenal ya :D

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