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The man with the hay hat

Jerry from kemanx921

The man with the hay hat…
He sing a song…
In the lonely night…

Playing an old guitar…
The sky as a musical notes…
And the star as the chord…

Humming a longing…
That flow with the breeze...
Unburden his mind
In dead earnest

A yearning for someone …
That will never blow over

Then...
With the song...
He want break through the time…
To satisfy his desire...

Although...
It's only to see her smile.


#Synopsis: Tentang sebuah kerinduan yang tak tertahan :)

#Idioms :
unburden his mind = mengungkapkan rasa
in dead earnest = dengan sepenuh hati

blow over = reda/usai

Comments

Himmi ! said…
ecciee yg lagi rindu.. ~__~

aahaha :D
Dannesya said…
waduh... semakin romantis... :)
Unknown said…
keren keren...ada gambarnya lagi ya. sip sip....
Anonymous said…
weees . . . romantika rindu menggelora..hehehe..pissss
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@N = ini symbol kerinduan :)
@Fanny = itu kan si jerry hehehe
@Anne : karnamu aku begitu :)
@Himie : itu symbol kerinduan :)
Dannesya said…
hauuu jadi maluuuu *naruh tangan di bawah dagu*
Unknown said…
Missing someone we love can make us very dizzy.
naturalzine said…
singgah lagi disini sobat :)
OMG thats good poem...
muarra said…
waw puisinya keren nie,, i like it,,, and i follow u now,,,
terbayang langsung sosok si pria memakai topi ini kkk~
NURA said…
asalamualaikum
fun playing the old guitar
add a romantic lover when in addition there
octarezka said…
siapa yang pemilik senyum itu??
:D
lah teu ngarti sia teh ngomong naon atuh
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Elsa said…
agak bingung dengan puisinya kali ini

:(
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Abbigayle : U r welcome :)
@Obat : sok teu sami2 belajar atuh :)
@Rez : seseorang disana :D
@Nura : yes he is a romantic guys :D
@CC ; hehehe
@muarra : :)
@Imtikhan : tq :)
@H. Nizam : yes U right sir :)
@Anne : sini cubit dikit pipinya hihihihi
Tezzue said…
ohh man that remind me with someone
wow keren banget puisinya (lagunya) dan gambarnya juga lucu.... thank
Aulawi Ahmad said…
BK : ini bukan lagu bro ;) tq b4 :)
@Rezki : nah moga terobati rindunya :)
@Elsa : memang ada beberapa bait yg kubuat berupa symbol :)
SANG PEMBELAJAR said…
Nice Post Sob...
Wah... ini puisi ya?? :D
Absen perdana, skalian mau share MP3 Kisah Motivasi Bag. IX
Mohon direview Sob... Thx
Salam bLogger, :)
hiks, mengharukan Wi :(

bagusnya gambar di atas itu Wi >.<
Diana said…
Very nice! Have a great day :)
Linda said…
I really like this gentle poem. It has some lovely observations. You have a unique voice - so important in poetry.
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Linda : tq Linda, I really appreciated that :)
@Diana : Tq Diana, hv great day too :)
@Ajeng ; :)
@SP : ya :)
Mr.odoy said…
truly beautiful poetry
Ulan News said…
wow keren bgt puisi na sob :D
Senja Berita said…
nice puisinya, bgus bgt, salam kenal ya :D

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