A word in your ear

One day with U…
Together through the path …

We plod one’s way
The clouds always follow…
As though as guardian…
From the sun n rain…

Then we sat beneath the trees…
Enjoying the sound of breeze…
Which flows between the leaves n twigs…
Humming the serenade of nature…

Bring us be immersed in other dimension…
There’s only U and me…

Until I let myself go
to said something...
With a word in your ear…

I'v been run away from hesitate now…
Because I rely on U…
As a woman after my heart.


#Synopsis : 
Nuansa yang pesonakan jiwa, hapuskan segala keraguan tuk menjalani nyata dengan suka.

#Idioms :
Let myself/oneself go = tak dapat menahan diri
Plod one's way = berjalan perlahan
a word in your ear = bisikan

33 comments:

Annesya said...

bang aulawi... bang aulawi... <<< ga ngerti mau komen apa. hehehe... nyapa aja deh... :D

-ka said...

ska bait trakhir kak,
kepercayaan..satu hal yg tpenting
=D
oiy, it blog pny q kak, emang q ganti abis2n
ngehe

novi saja said...

a woman after my heart...

who's that lucky woman?

NURA said...

asalamualaikum
one day with you
a walk with a lover
pasti tak kan terlupakan.

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

wah wah...siapakah woman nya itu? ehem ehem....eh dibukukan aja puisinya...

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

oot: mas, aku nulis ttg exort nih. siapa tau dia jadi mau ngeblog lagi hahaha

Neng Rara said...

assalamualaikum..
ahai..halo mas?
met malam
salam

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Fanny : iya tadi habis kubaca, btw dibukukan boleh juga tuh :)
@Nura : wa'alaikum salam mbak
@Novi : hmm who is she :)
@Rez : yg penting jgn percaya krn cinta hehehe
@Anne : kenapa gak ngerti hehe

Annesya said...

habisnya kalo uda terlalu romantis, saya langsung spicles, klepek2, ga bisa ngomong apa-apa hehehehehe... :D

buwel 'ali' cikrik said...

ajib nuansanya, membawa ke masa muda:-)

Mine and Me said...

there's only u and me...

aduh... dalam banget...

pertanyaan yang paling pentingx bang aluwi, jadi saya dimana dong? hehehe :P

obyektif-magazine said...

With a word in your ear, before you lets go with you self....Very good, congrat n sucsesfull for you are...

Salam:
Obyektif Cyber Magazine
(obyektif.com)

socafahreza's blog said...

keren banget nih puisinya, sampek buka kamus dulu..
hehe maklum :D

Ninda Rahadi said...

bang kkooookk bisa fontnya beda-beda gitu gimana caranya ya...


bang kapan kumpulan puisinya terbit nih? ehehehe :D

Anonymous said...

Hallo teman-teman bloger, selamat malam.....

Salam kompak:
Obyektif Cyber Magazine
(obyektif.com)

SAZLINA COMP said...

salam persahabatan
berkunjung silahturrahmi sob
sukses selalu ya

Zaen said...

nais poem.. good job man :D

Atma Muthmainna said...

aduch ,ga tau artinya..hehee
salam kenal ijin follow,semoga berkenan kunjung balik..

Elsa said...

siapa nih yang menjadi inspirasinya?

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Terima kasih

HUMUL said...

Izin foloow ya

Clara Canceriana said...

mau dong dibisikkin hahaha~ *melipir*

aephobia said...

ngeri om bacanya...keren!

sederhana, ngena, dan bermakna

wanita, sesuatu yang benar2 mengalihkan dunia kita

maaf baru berkunjung balik

rosie said...

it seems like a romantic song
but anyway congrats for the nice poetry

Tips Mengobati Penyakit Bisul said...

makasih bacaannya...mas boleh tukar beklinks gak

agen xamthone plus batam said...

salam sehat slalu

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Agen : sama2 bro :)
@TMPB :boleh :)
@Rosie : tq sist :)
@Aephobia : hehehe
@CC : sini hehe
@Humul : oke :)
@Chartini : sukses buat acaranya :)
@Elsa : kamu hehehe
@Atma : tq :)
@Zaen : tq :)
@Saz : tq jg sob :)
@Anyin : kolaborasi aja gimana hehehe
@Soca : hehehe
@OM : salam balik n tq :)
@Mine & Me : kamu ada ditempat tersendiri hehehe
@Buwel : tq bro :)
@Anne : gitu ta hehehe

Di Jual Rumah said...

blog walking :D
salam kenal :D

Annesya said...

bang kok ga posting lagi sih? mana susah jalan2 di sini, ga ada archive-nya. susah baca2 yg lain...

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Anne : maklum abang sibuk sayang (sok mesra) hihihi btw tuh dah dibikinin n tq b4 masukannya :D

@RJ : sukses jualannya bro :)

yadi said...

kunjungan siang, mantep artikel nya

how to have a baby said...

salam kenal aja ya....nice blogs.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@How : salam kenal juga :)
@Yadi : :)

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