I'm not the competent painter...
That could make you perfect...
Like the painting monalisa...
But i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart...
I'm not a police...
That had a weapon..
To protect you...
But I will always be there...
Whenever you needed me...
I'm not the doctor...
That could cure...
And treated your wound...
But I will take care of you...
So that was avoided from all that...
I'm also not a politicians...
That was good at to speak...
Make u fell asleep by the promise...
I'm just an ordinary person ...
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.
Author
- Aulawi Ahmad
- De Javu is told about my imagination, and share my own stories in the past n the current time.
43 comments:
hu hu hu...indah sekali kalimat terakhirnya. Aulawi, kalo cewekmu dikasih puisi gini bisa tepar dia saking senangnya. hahaha...dasar penyair.
oh so sweeeeeeeeet....
so romantic!!!
wow so sweet
so romantic!!!
iam not an actor iam not a star, n i dont even have my own car....... but iam hopping so much u 'll stay n u 'll love me anyway qiqiqiiqiqi
hehehehe..... kok yg koment cewek semuah....??? hihihihihi
but.. bagus puisinya...
co cweeeeeet..... hihihihihi
theme blogmu terpilih nih sbg theme blog fave aku. tapi lagi dibuat postingannya.
W0w...
Keren banget..
Bikin cewek klepek2.
Hahahaha...
"i will made u feel perfect..." Suka dengan kalimat ini. Just feel perfect, walau semua tahu kalau tidak ada yg sempurna..
Nice..
@Fanny : tq :) sayangnya cenya dah gak ada hehehe, btw theme blogku jadi fav wauuu sungguh tersanjung, tq ya (latarbelakang foto itu ketika aku main di lawang sewu-semarang)hiiiii
@Elsa : tq :) just for u :)
@Richo : lagu lak'an bro hehehe
@Rangga : tq :)
@Fai : tq :)
@Ajeng : yah bener memang gak ada yg sempurna, tapi "dibuat" merasa sempurna :)
jatuh cintaaaa? :D
well...cool this blog
we're just ordinary people.. all we need just take it slow...
klepek klepek
kata orang, yg dibutuhkan memang hanya cinta XD
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subhanallah...kayaknya pandai merayu ya bro?hihih kidding bro :D
Perfct man...I am dreaming...
@Mino : sama kamu kayaknya hehehe
@Katrina : tq :)
@Rosi... :)
@Soewoeng : hehehe
@Clara : i love u too (loooh) hahaha
@aviorclef : tq, ente pandai berkata pula rupanya hehehe salam kenal juga :)
@Aisha : gak juga Sist, kadang2 iya hahaha
@UMS : wake up now sist hehehe
bagus banget pusinya.. terimalah dan cintailah pasangan kita apa adanya..
aduh mampus saya benarrr benaarrr meltiiinggg
hadooowwwww bacanya...boong aja pacar elo ga klemer2 dikasih puisi kaya gini
Selamat pagi kawand...
I just love the atmosphere that you created. Bravo!
I'm just an ordinary person ...
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.
begitu sederhana, begitu bersahaja.
hmmmm....so nice...
aku suka kalimat..
" i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart..."
@Batz :tq yah mungkin harus begitu :)
@Anyin :hehehe melting (melet tingting)
@Exort : bisa aja loe bro hehehe
@Rock : selamat pagi juga :)
@B.held : Tq sist :)
@Kantong plastik :kadang kesederhanaan memang bersahaja apalagi tulus dari hati :)
@Ritma : iya sungguh indah jika bisa menyenangkan hati seseorang dengan hati :)
I am just a human being..
trying to be perfect..
Although, nothing is perfect in this world.
we could only try to be.....
so sweeeeettttttttttt swit sweiiiiittt, aku juga deh qeqeeq, pengen nangis, indah banget :(
haha tak apa bro kan mewakili tuh heheh
kamu memang bukan I'm not the competent painter... tapi penyair yg kompeten. hehehe
met siang, mampir sbg wakil blog f2
jadi mau terbang *loh*
@Aisyah : yer u right sist, we only could try :)
@Inuel:tq ya, btw udah jgn nangis ayo pake celananya wkwkwkwk
@Richo :okelah kalau begitu hehe
@Fanny : wah tambah mekar nih idungku wkwkwkw
@F&F : tq dah mampir :)
@Septi : jgn lupa pake sabuk pengaman ye (lho) hehehe
all of we are ornidary person, but he/she who can make such an unordinary thing - like more giving than receiving - is the one that we should call him/her human being.. :)
salam sobat
puisi yang bikin saya tersanjung nich mas,,,
sangat romantis,,siip bsnget.
"But i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart..."
aiihh.. romantisnyaaaa ^^
sepakat ama kantong plastik alias mellyn:
sederhana, apa adanya tapi bikin kelipuk-kulipuk
puisi bagus, apalagi kata-kata terkahirnya
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.
hebat :D
@Darin : tq bro, but this poem did not need long explained like u think, just simple meaning bro only about fall in LOVE) :)
@Nura : tq mbak :)
@Yolizz : sayang cenya dah gak ada :)
@Bintang : tq, memang intinya tentang kesederhanaan :)
@Umar : waduh tambah gede lagi nih idung hehe, btw tq :)
hemmmmmmmmm...... Bagus bagus..... simple....
wow.. so beautiful ^^ selamat atas cintanya..
@Kristanto : tq :)
@Jodie : hehe tq ya :)
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