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Just an ordinary person

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I'm not the competent painter...
That could make you perfect...
Like the painting monalisa...

But i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart...

I'm not a police...
That had a weapon..
To protect you...

But I will always be there...
Whenever you needed me...

I'm not the doctor...
That could cure...
And treated your wound...

But I will take care of you...
So that was avoided from all that...

I'm also not a politicians...
That was good at to speak...
Make u fell asleep by the promise...

I'm just an ordinary person ...
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.
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Unknown said…
hu hu hu...indah sekali kalimat terakhirnya. Aulawi, kalo cewekmu dikasih puisi gini bisa tepar dia saking senangnya. hahaha...dasar penyair.
9/3/10 11:51
Elsa said…
oh so sweeeeeeeeet....

so romantic!!!
9/3/10 12:07
Elsa said…
wow so sweet
so romantic!!!
9/3/10 12:18
richo said…
iam not an actor iam not a star, n i dont even have my own car....... but iam hopping so much u 'll stay n u 'll love me anyway qiqiqiiqiqi
9/3/10 12:56
RanggaGoBloG said…
hehehehe..... kok yg koment cewek semuah....??? hihihihihi

but.. bagus puisinya...
9/3/10 13:04
RanggaGoBloG said…
co cweeeeeet..... hihihihihi
9/3/10 13:08
Unknown said…
theme blogmu terpilih nih sbg theme blog fave aku. tapi lagi dibuat postingannya.
9/3/10 13:14
fai_cong said…
W0w...
Keren banget..
Bikin cewek klepek2.
Hahahaha...
9/3/10 14:50
Ajeng said…
"i will made u feel perfect..." Suka dengan kalimat ini. Just feel perfect, walau semua tahu kalau tidak ada yg sempurna..
Nice..
9/3/10 15:32
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Fanny : tq :) sayangnya cenya dah gak ada hehehe, btw theme blogku jadi fav wauuu sungguh tersanjung, tq ya (latarbelakang foto itu ketika aku main di lawang sewu-semarang)hiiiii
@Elsa : tq :) just for u :)
@Richo : lagu lak'an bro hehehe
@Rangga : tq :)
@Fai : tq :)
@Ajeng : yah bener memang gak ada yg sempurna, tapi "dibuat" merasa sempurna :)
9/3/10 16:51
@minumino said…
jatuh cintaaaa? :D
9/3/10 17:13
katrina said…
well...cool this blog
9/3/10 18:25
rosi said…
we're just ordinary people.. all we need just take it slow...
9/3/10 18:39
soewoeng said…
klepek klepek
9/3/10 19:11
Clara Canceriana said…
kata orang, yg dibutuhkan memang hanya cinta XD
9/3/10 20:10
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9/3/10 20:20
Dream Competition said…
subhanallah...kayaknya pandai merayu ya bro?hihih kidding bro :D
9/3/10 21:42
UMS EDUKASI RSBI said…
Perfct man...I am dreaming...
9/3/10 21:43
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Mino : sama kamu kayaknya hehehe
@Katrina : tq :)
@Rosi... :)
@Soewoeng : hehehe
@Clara : i love u too (loooh) hahaha
@aviorclef : tq, ente pandai berkata pula rupanya hehehe salam kenal juga :)
@Aisha : gak juga Sist, kadang2 iya hahaha
@UMS : wake up now sist hehehe
9/3/10 22:22
Batzsurya said…
bagus banget pusinya.. terimalah dan cintailah pasangan kita apa adanya..
9/3/10 22:48
Ninda Rahadi said…
aduh mampus saya benarrr benaarrr meltiiinggg
9/3/10 23:06
exort said…
hadooowwwww bacanya...boong aja pacar elo ga klemer2 dikasih puisi kaya gini
10/3/10 00:16
Rock said…
Selamat pagi kawand...
10/3/10 01:05
Anonymous said…
I just love the atmosphere that you created. Bravo!
10/3/10 03:43
kantong plastik said…
I'm just an ordinary person ...
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.

begitu sederhana, begitu bersahaja.
10/3/10 05:03
Ayoe Ritma said…
hmmmm....so nice...
aku suka kalimat..
" i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart..."
10/3/10 08:01
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Batz :tq yah mungkin harus begitu :)
@Anyin :hehehe melting (melet tingting)
@Exort : bisa aja loe bro hehehe
@Rock : selamat pagi juga :)
@B.held : Tq sist :)
@Kantong plastik :kadang kesederhanaan memang bersahaja apalagi tulus dari hati :)
@Ritma : iya sungguh indah jika bisa menyenangkan hati seseorang dengan hati :)
10/3/10 10:04
aisyah muna said…
I am just a human being..
trying to be perfect..

Although, nothing is perfect in this world.
we could only try to be.....
10/3/10 10:21
None said…
so sweeeeettttttttttt swit sweiiiiittt, aku juga deh qeqeeq, pengen nangis, indah banget :(
10/3/10 11:41
richo said…
haha tak apa bro kan mewakili tuh heheh
10/3/10 13:42
Unknown said…
kamu memang bukan I'm not the competent painter... tapi penyair yg kompeten. hehehe
10/3/10 14:10
fanda dan fanny said…
met siang, mampir sbg wakil blog f2
10/3/10 14:12
Anonymous said…
jadi mau terbang *loh*
10/3/10 14:22
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Aisyah : yer u right sist, we only could try :)
@Inuel:tq ya, btw udah jgn nangis ayo pake celananya wkwkwkwk
@Richo :okelah kalau begitu hehe
@Fanny : wah tambah mekar nih idungku wkwkwkw
@F&F : tq dah mampir :)
@Septi : jgn lupa pake sabuk pengaman ye (lho) hehehe
10/3/10 15:25
Darin said…
all of we are ornidary person, but he/she who can make such an unordinary thing - like more giving than receiving - is the one that we should call him/her human being.. :)
10/3/10 16:25
NURA said…
salam sobat
puisi yang bikin saya tersanjung nich mas,,,
sangat romantis,,siip bsnget.
10/3/10 16:35
Yolizz said…
"But i will made u feel perfect...
With my heart..."

aiihh.. romantisnyaaaa ^^
10/3/10 16:55
bintang said…
sepakat ama kantong plastik alias mellyn:

sederhana, apa adanya tapi bikin kelipuk-kulipuk
10/3/10 19:56
Anonymous said…
puisi bagus, apalagi kata-kata terkahirnya
That loved you...
Only with you...
Only for you...
Till the end of later.
hebat :D
10/3/10 21:16
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Darin : tq bro, but this poem did not need long explained like u think, just simple meaning bro only about fall in LOVE) :)
@Nura : tq mbak :)
@Yolizz : sayang cenya dah gak ada :)
@Bintang : tq, memang intinya tentang kesederhanaan :)
@Umar : waduh tambah gede lagi nih idung hehe, btw tq :)
10/3/10 21:46
Kristanto-wds said…
hemmmmmmmmm...... Bagus bagus..... simple....
10/3/10 23:20
Joddie said…
wow.. so beautiful ^^ selamat atas cintanya..
11/3/10 09:06
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Kristanto : tq :)
@Jodie : hehe tq ya :)
11/3/10 12:42
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