Please don't cry...
Forgive me...
That could not keep the promise...
To bring our heart...
Towards the holy gate...
Not my intention to deny...
Because for me...
Promised not the appearance statement...
But...
You must know...
I could not to realize the certainty...
Because I am not the Lord...
I also not request...
You must be waiting...
I only ask for...
So that you believed to me...
Believed...
If you always...
The most beautiful woman for me...
My earthly paradise...
Believed...
If this the best...
For us at this time...
Although bitter...
And believed...
If fate not belonging to us.
37 comments:
wow , It was great . Rebounding makes the love deep and strong .beautiful attempt.Take care
please forgive me too...hoho
i believe in you, mas...... :)
aku percaya jika takdir memang bukan milik kita...:)
do something better although it's hurt
Nggak Saya nggak akan menangis Mas, Saya percaya Tuhan Maha Penyayang... hiks...
Tapi boleh khan bila aku terus menunggumu Mas... :-)
@Baili..tq :)
@JB...tq but please let me go wkwkwkwwk
@Vany...tq, n please tell ur parent when i'll marry u hihihihi
@Richo...yes that's our risk :)
@Buwel...sudahlah hapus airmatamu, nih 100$ buat beli permen wkwkwkwkw
@Achen..oh my God, knp dirimu? aku masih normal brother wkwkwkwkw
salam sobat
yes,,very nice,if don't cry,,
ayo kita bergembira,,agar sehat jasmani dan rohani kita.
uhhh kasian...
mudah"an si cewek itu percaya ^^
@Mbak Nur...ayooo bargambiiira hehehe
@Clara...mudah2han hihihihi
jd inget sesuatu :(
ini pengalaman pribadi beneran ya? kl iya, gw yakin tuh cewe pasti tambah nangis dibuatin puisi ky gini :D
kereeen..mestinya pacarku juga bikin puisi kyk gini nih. hehehee
aku juga minta maaf yah, ngga bisa nulis bahasa inggris :D..
aku jadi pengen di bilang djantiq juja,jhahah
aku juga ngga bisa janji mas :D
@Mino..maafkan aku :)
@Exort..hmmm bukan bro, ini cuma karangan aj, kalau aku yg diingkari janji iyaaaa wkwkwkwkwk
@Fanny...hmmm kasih tau aku alamat pacarmu ntar tak suruh dia buat hihihihihi
@Inuel&Nyunz...kamu cantik dan surga dunia bagi pacarmu :) n jangan berjanji kalau gak mau hehehehe
wow, what an amazing poem! its very deep brother
(sambil membayangkan seseorang menuliskan puisi seperti ini untukku)
so soulful . . . excellent work.
I did not cry,these tears are falling himself hehehe
kepercayaan emang kunci utama dalam sebuah hubungan yah :)
i don't wanna cry, but the tears can't stop falling down :p
to be a tough persont......... recover the waekness with action. not a cry
assalamualaikum..
puisi yg indah..mas
salam
hmmm...*bingung*
hmmm...*nyari-nyari kamus*
hmmm...sabar aja ya.. apa pun itu, mg yg terbaik... *sok ngerti*
i am not a princess but yes i got that depth of joy what she had after helping bird ,and it is most precious gift of god thanks for such kind words god bless you
janji janji janjii janjiiii * nyanyi* hiii
forgive me too :)
hehehe... udah lama nggak berkunjung ke blog ini.... :)
inspirasi puisinya dibuat dari pengalaman sendiri ya :D?
@Liza..hmmm ini kan khusus untukmu :)
@B.Held..tq sist :)
@Aisha...hehehe nih sapu tangan :)
@Yolizz...kalau dah gak kuat utk percaya..let him go, mungkin takdir bukan utk bersama :)
@Richo...kalau cowok mungkin bisa, lah kalau ce susah bro :)
@Neng rara...tq sist :)
@Deeedee.. tq :)
@Baili..yes i know, but tq 4 explain that..GBU too
@Nchi...maaf ya sayang, tapi janjiku bukanlah janji yang semu :)
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That was wonderful. Very well said. Nice effort...:)
Rien...kalau yang ini bukan, ini hanya karangan aja :)
Mas... *_^ :-D
Ngambil 100 $ ajah... Makasih... :-)
Sesekali boleh juga, dong untuk introspeksi diri agar esok lebih baik.
@achen..haiyaaaaaaa wkwkwkwkw
@Buwel..sama2 :)
@alamendah...iya ya silakan :)
@Jihad...tq bro :)
all you have to do is just PASRAH...
danberdoa tentunya. soalnya mau protes juga gak bisa. hehehehee
iya tinggal itu yg bisa kita lakukan :)
huwa puisinya ini tentang gagal nikah ya ya ya... sediiih
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