When the sun came...
Welcomed the beautiful morning...
Washed dew...
In the wet leaves...
Like your smile...
The faithful greet me ...
Made me be enchanted...
Without could speak...
Your smile indeed the difference...
Be full of the sincerity...
The sincerity of a woman...
That loved a man...
Now that smile...
Not for me anymore...
Disappears...
Like at dusk...
That changed the night...
The smile...
Only became the heart painting...
Still whines up to now...
Although still was tomorrow...
And the same sun.
Author
- Aulawi Ahmad
- De Javu is told about my imagination, and share my own stories in the past n the current time.
43 comments:
beautiful poem..as usually ^_^
great weekend friend.
Puisi yang indah! Senyuman membuat kebahagiaan untuk diri sendiri dan orang yang ada disekitar kita!
hanya bisa menikmati...
Semoga senyum cerahnya sang surya, memberi suasana tersendiri buat kita setiap hari...
kereeeeeen... >.<
have a nice weekend ^^
ya sudah, nih aku kasih senyum deh utk gantiin senyum yg hilang itu. hehhehe....
Jadi ingat lagunya MLTR.. (enggak nyambung ya?)
jadi pingin liat senyumnya itu
tersenyum... :-)
Nice poems... :-)
smile...:) :)
just find another smile,haha
hihi...
prikitiw...
:D
"The smile...
Only became the heart painting..."
not just become the heart painting but the smile is life
duhh ce yang inspired neh puisi mantap kali lah ^^
slalu mantap dah puisi puisi bang aulawi ^^
met malming
yes yes yes... ra patek mudeng akuw...
@Darin :tq n greet weekend too :)
@aura :tq :)
@Dimas :tq :)
@Lilah : amin :)
@inge : tq, n met wiken juga :)
@Fanny :tq :)
@Exort : hehehe
@ajeng : lagunya siapa tuh mbak hehehe
@achen :bales senyum :)
@Buwel : tq :)
@Fitri : tq :)
@Mino :iya,kan nungguin kamu :)
@Fai :prikitiw balik hehehe
@Elok :yes u right, but that words conection with paragraph three "now that smile not for me anymore, disappears"... :)
@Ranny :bisa aj :) tq b4 n met malming juga :)
puisinya bagus...
senyum lagi... hiihihi
apa kabar sahabatku? semoga hari libur yang indah ini dapat menghilangkan lelah setelah seminggu bekerja. selamat berakhir pekan
salam
Liza
cie cie..... hatimu pinter melukis brarti bro heheh
senyumku aja deh yang buat mas, :D, lupakan senyumnya ketika dia mulai menggoreskan luka :),
maaf telat datang hehe
always smile..nice poem..
you know I can't smile without u
can't smile without u
garry manillow >
btw I got a tag 4 u, please pick it up from my blog. thanks
Now that smile...
for me too?? he..he..
coming n smile with u... my friend....hope not only become heart painting
@Kang sugen : tq kang :)
@Rahad : tq :)
@Achen : jhiaa
@Liza : tq liz :)
@Richo : hehehe
@Inuel : tq nul :)
@Batz : tq :)
@Rossi : hehehe malah nyanyi :) tq b4 :)
@UMS : of course :)
@Dewi : tq, i hope so :)
met hari minggu. bawain kue putu
nice poem... ^^ suka bikin puisi juga yaa.. salam kenal dari rose...^^
komen rose hilang??
:-( salam kenal sobat...^^
nice poetry....keep it up :D
komen sambil senyum maniezz
menyapa mas aulawi melewati detik minggu untuk berganti senin
hehheh
hohohoho... manteeeppp deehh... a smile for u... :)
keren puisinya ato post nya.... mantap mantap....
Tersenyum ini....
I like your smile too... ehehe
@Fanny : horee kue putu, tq ya :)
@Rose : tq, hanya iseng aja n makasih kjgn balesannya :)
@Trisnok : tq :)
@Bintang : tq jadi semangat lagi nih berkat senyummu :)
@Yolizz :tq senyuman manisnya :)
@ Kris : tq :)
@Anyin : hehehe :)
nice poem nice poem :P
salam friend
the smile,,,,,
I like smile,, coz your smile too...
mas.. mas.. mas.. good night :D
@Ola : hehehe tq :p
@Nura : tq mbak :)
@Nyunz : gud nite too hihihi
sabar ya mas....semoga senyumannya tidak mebuatmu senyum senyum sndiri...ntar dikira orang...mmmm....hehehe...bcanda ding..
nih aja lagi ketawa sendiri hahahahha
we are all live under the same sun.
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