One day

One day...
In a flower garden...
with you...

It should be the beautiful day...

However...
The sun was blazing...
As though jealous...
Because of having near you...

The wind blew tight...
As though angry...
If I caressed your hair...

Time went like lightning...
As though being not willing...
If i spend the time with you...

Mosquitoes, the bee and ants...
Be annoying...
As though not want to...
If I touched your skin...

Forgive me dear...
We must go and moving...
As fate would have it...
If it was not the day for us.

42 comments:

Edwin's Personal Blog said...

In the garden, just we two...
Hati-hati.... :)

Edwin's Personal Blog said...

Apa kabar Mas Aulawi?

inge / cyber dreamer said...

syukuri walau hanya sehari
g kurang k? *dijitak*

inuel said...

iya tak maafin :P

buwel said...

romantik abiz...

achen said...

kenangan yang unforgetable yak... hehehhe
eh unforgetable apa yak... halah malah nanya.. hihihi

inge / cyber dreamer said...

mas...
ada tag di blog ku
sekalian ama award ^^

diambil yah ^^

Psychosocial said...

wew, puitis banget....

vany said...

oh, jd ini ceritanya pacaran di kebun malam2 ya, mas?
gak serem nih?
hihihi

Jazz Muhammad said...

beeuhhh ini kang momen paling indah..

maunya salting mulu hehe

siplah, n semoga langgeng (hehe apaa gitu maksudna..)

Neng Rara said...

assalamualaikum..
yes! romantizzzz..
salam

catatan kecilku said...

Kalau lagunya MJ sih bunyinya... One day in your life... hehehe

the others said...

Aku suka awalnya... spt dongeng yang indah.
Pada suatu hari, disebuah taman bersamamu....

disatia febri said...

So sweet...

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Febri : like u :)
@The others : tq mbak :)
@Catatan kecilku : hehe, kalau yg ini one day in my life :)
@Neng : wa'alaikum salam :)
@Jazz : ini sebenarnya ttg unlucky day jazz :)
@Vanny : kan berdua hihihi
@Psycho : cuma expresif :)
@Inge : oke n tq :)
@Achen : ini bukan kenangan bro tapi cuma gambaran :)
@Buwel : sebenernya gak ingin romantis tapi lucu, ternyata gak lucu ya bro hiks
@Inuel : tq ;)
@Inge : yah itulah inti puisi ini :) tq :)
@Edwins : hehehe cuma pegangan tok kok mas, btw alhamdulillah sehat mas, tq :)

exort said...

hahahahha...hare gene masih pacaran dikebon???
*kaburrr*

achen said...

wah, kek labelnya yak, analogy. duh, maaf ya mas... salah persepsi. he

بوويل said...

wah, sebenernya ya mo koment lucu, ya brati, lucu dan romantis. he

AISHALIFE-LINE said...

Baik betul itu yang memaafkan bro heheh.

Tour, Food, and Health said...

come to be your follower dude..!^^

nietha said...

aku ngak ikutan jealous kok kalo kamu dua2an.. tapi ngintip bolehkan?

kurniawan.q said...

maaf
baru berkunjung sahabat
puisi yang romantis
^_^

Call me Batz said...

ha ha..pake autan donk biar gak ada nyamuk..haha

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Batz : hehehe, itu aku bilang unlucky day for us
@Kurniawan : tq brother :)
@Nietha : hahaha asal jgn ketauan
@TFH : oke n tq :)
@Aisha : hahaha bisa aj sist ini
@Buwel : hahahaha artinya puisiku kurang tulus ya hingga gak nyampe maksudnya
@Achen : ggp brother mungkin karena pake idiom inggris jadi gak kena hehehe
@Exort : wkwkwkwkw makana salah tempat bro

Awan said...

ni puisi buat cabetina bukan..??

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Awan : bukan be, ni puisi perumpamaan bai hehe

richoyul said...

yah makane klo ngedate mandi dulu bro biar ga di temenin nyamuk heheheh

Kang Sugeng said...

xixixi.... jai kebayang malem2 di taman bunga.
ngapain aja tuh? hehe...

Rosi said...

lagi melankolis banged ya bang... ;p

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Rosi : wkwkwkwk bisa aja loe :)
@Kang sugeng : gak cuma titik tok kang wkwkwkwkw
@Richo : wes adhus bareng malah hohohohohoh

ajeng said...

Kok jadi ingat lagunya Michael Jackson ya? One day in life..

Ayas Tasli Wiguna said...

please forgive me T^T

PURNOMO SHIDIQ "Faza Fauzi Akbar" said...

one day should be the beautiful day...

semoga aja terjadi...

Gema said...

susah emang kalo saingannya ama matahari, angin dan waktu....

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Gema : hahahaha bener banget, terpaksa ngalah :)
@Shidiq : amiin :)
@Ayas : oke tak maafin yas hehehe
@Ajeng : waduh, piye lagune mbak ajeng, ane taunya black or white hehehe

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

duh, jadi pengen nangis. hiks....ingus dan upil keluar deh. hiks....gak ada sapu tangan pula.

everything BALI said...

nice poem bro!
keep up your good mood!

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Fanny : cup cup jgn nangis ayo ingus dan upilnya dilap dulu wkwkwkwkw
@Everything Bali :tq n oke :)

Abdul Malyk said...

in a flower garden with u..
hmm..
berduaan ya..hati2..hehehe..

Aulawi Ahmad said...

gak jadi bro banyak nyamuk soalnya hehehehe

Elsa said...

kalo lagi berduaan
digigit ribuat nyamuk...gak terasa kaliii....

Aulawi Ahmad said...

ini sangat terasa soalnya hehehehe

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