The Door...

I knocked on the door...
Was said by me greetings...
However did not yet have the answer...

Although my hands were wounded...
Although millions of second were waiting...
Will continue I knocked on your door...
Until being open for me...

Because...
The door was so beautiful...
Could not I turned...
Although not from gold...
Or was adorned with the jewel...

I will not move to the other door...
Before having the assurance...
Before you answered...
Yes or not.

17 comments:

fanny said...

yes, this is the answer. come in please.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

oh tq very much...he2

Zahra Lathifa said...

nice poem bro...my door is always opened for your friendship :) n let me follow your way then...keep happy as always :)

exort said...

ooh...pintu
ada apakah dibalik pintu...

elistadyon said...

nite i'm come here and open the door

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Zahra...hmm finally, tq 4 ur friendship "door" :) i really appreciated that :)
#Exort..dibalik pintu itu ada masa depanku he2222
@Elistadyon..Tq at the same time..mm i asked to drink please wkwkwkwk

Tom said...

This is very powerful writing. I love it.

B.Held said...

a fascinating concept and execution.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Tom...Tq Bro
@B.Held...wau really seriously comment :)

NURA said...

salam friend,,
yes Im waiting,,until being open the door for you.
nyambung ngga siih,,,

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Nura..salam balik :) wait for me ya, i'll knock ur door he2

mocca_chi said...

pintu hati, hiihii...

pintu hati sudha terbuka, pintu kessempatan yg belum ^ ^

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Chi...tau aja hehehe

Rhien-chan said...

Di balik pintu ada padang bunga dandelion yang luas, kemudian angin membawamu pada seorang gadis yang menunggu seorang teman. Gadis itu adalah... SAYA, wkwkwkwk...!!! XD

Nice poem...!!! :D

liza said...

nice poem bro.. just knock the door, i'll open it for you and for all my friend..

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Rien...hmmm tq dah mau menunggu diriku di padang bunga dandelion yg luas, awas kalau itu bukan kamu ya hehehehehe

@Liza..Tq Sist n Tq opened the door for me n all our friend :)

Rhien-chan said...

xixixixixi
tenang2 gadis itu pasti Karin... :)

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