My consolation...

You that there...
My consolation...
Be present you really tempted...
Gave me the hope to take a step...
Lighted the restless heart...

Don't be frightened...
I not ask for...
I only tried said...
What was felt by me...

You were beautiful for me...
White like jasmine...
Blossomed like roses...
Although not me who will reap you
Will be guarded by me always...
So that not withered...
Although that only from far...

I possibly fell in love...
But not expected to be loved...
I liked...
But not expected to be liked...
Because...
This the sincere heart expression...
Be as sincere as the sun...
That lighted the earth.

9 comments:

none said...

what a wonderful feeling, a sense of unconditional love. how lucky woman is, you deserve to get him :)

Huzaifa said...

dear very nicely written....

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Henny...Tq, i hoped she read this he2
@Huzaifa..Tq n u too :)

mocca_chi said...

an actualy, i use dictionary when read it, i dont want pass one word. hiii...

this poetry remind me to a removed poetry in my blog, was created by my lover.

nice to meet u ^ ^

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@mocca_chi...hmm tq very much if u used dictionary for understood my poem he22, i hoped this poem could made u seldom be toucheded ha2
N i hoped u always happy with ur lover :) nice to meet u too :)

TOMAS said...

Thank you for the tender touch of your verses. The refreshing smell of wild flowers knocked on my heart - your poetry silenced shrill logic of the street banners and awaken the dreams
Yours http://artbytomas.blogspot.com/

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Mr Tomas...Tq, Really the congenial comment :)

bening said...

puisi yang keren, meskipun aku tidak memahami beberapa istilah kata ;)

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@bening...makasih ya, aku pake bhs inggris agar bisa dibaca oleh semua org didunia (harapanku spt itu hehehe) ...yg penting kamu paham inti dari puisi diatas ok Sist :) CU

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