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Hold my hand

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Hold my hands...
So that you are convinced...
If the distance not restraint between us...

Believed...
This life has been arranged...
If indeed our fate to together...
There is none that could obstruct...

However...
We must also be ready received...
If we...
Was not predestined to together...

Hold my hands...
So that we are ready faced...
All the possibilities that will happen...

Enjoy this togetherness...
Don't be wasted...
With the frightened feeling...
About our future...

The two of us...
Only humankind was imperfect...
That loved each other...

Loved with the heart...
That was not based on the lust...
Loved with logic...
That was not blinded by hope...

Hold my hands...
So that you knew...
I was here...
For you.
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Arjuna said…
we can together...
together in the grip of hope..

nice,,
3/5/10 12:51
hendro-prayitno said…
pegang tanganku, kau bisa merasakan hangatnya itu
3/5/10 13:00
Unknown said…
aduuh.duuh..meleleh gue bacanya..hiks...hiks....bisa kejang2 nih kalo ada yg ngomong gitu ke aku. wakkkkkk....dasar penyair romantis makan minum gratis...sedikit berkumis..dan bau amis...
3/5/10 13:14
catatan kecilku said…
Hand in hand... we'll face the world..!
3/5/10 13:17
the others... said…
Singkatnya... bersama kita bisa..! Hehehe
3/5/10 13:18
Ajeng said…
Sini tak pegangin.. *Ups,enggak boleh ya*
3/5/10 14:19
NURA said…
salam sobat
iya pegang dan jabat erat tangan saya.
pertanda erat persahabatan kita ya,,
3/5/10 15:34
ali afif said…
@Mbak Ajeng: ah... :-D
3/5/10 16:14
buwel said…
Allohu Akbar!
Cinta yang tetap menggantungkan Takdir Tuhan...
3/5/10 16:15
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Hdsence : together with love :)
@Hendro : yoi bro :)
@Fanny : berkumis n amis, ada yg kurang tuh ceriwis n gak manis wkwkwkwkw
@Catatan kecil :bolehlah diartikan begitu :)
@The others : yah setuju mbak :)
@Ajeng : ehm, boleh kalau dah resmi :)
@Nura : siap mbak :)
@Achen : ehm :)
@Buwel : cinta yg nerimo :)
3/5/10 16:56
kurniawan.q said…
puisi yang sangat indah terimakasih
3/5/10 18:33
Psychosocial said…
*setelah buka kamus*

lagi mikirin siapa nih? sampe buat puisi ginian segala? hehehe..
3/5/10 19:46
Ratasoe said…
Puisi menyatakan perasaan sang penulis..hehe..pegang erat hngga mencapai rasaku..;-)
3/5/10 19:51
Nikmatnya Hidup said…
hold my hand n lets wash the clothes, lah tukang cuci donk hehehe...... suit suit..........
3/5/10 20:15
shidiq said…
erat jabat tanganku,
indahnya sebuah persahabatan....
3/5/10 20:18
Unknown said…
waah jadi deg2an nih

hehe
3/5/10 20:30
ali afif said…
malam Mas... Hold my handnya keren.. he
3/5/10 22:48
buwel said…
yups cinta yang nerimo... :-)
3/5/10 22:48
exort said…
ooo kirain tentang nuntun orang buta xixixixi
3/5/10 23:58
Clara Canceriana said…
aduh kalimat terakhirnya
bikin gimana gitu...XD
*membayangkan ada yg ngucapin itu ke aku*

tapi memang aku setuju, lebih baik nikmatin yang sekarang lagi ada di depan mata...^^
4/5/10 00:13
Anonymous said…
simply beautiful
4/5/10 04:42
fitRi said…
nice poem..romantis dan apa adanya...:)
4/5/10 05:32
AISHALIFE-LINE said…
Who is she bro?Can you introduce me to her?heheh.
4/5/10 05:38
mocca_chi said…
bru kali ini liat cinta dg logika hehehe
4/5/10 08:10
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Kurniawan :tq bro :)
@Psycho : mikirin kapan kawin hahahahaha
@Ratasoe :tq bro :)
@Richo :yg bener sebelum dan habis makan harus cuci tangan bro wkwwkkw
@Shidiq :bolehlah diartikan spst itu bro :)
@Jazz :asal jgn ama aku ya deg2 annya hehehe
@Achen :Tq :)
@Buwel :begitulah :)
@Exort : wkwkwkwkw nanti lain kali kutulis ttg itu bro
@Clara : yah kata2 itu kutulis untukmu deh :)
@B.Held :tq :)
@Fitri :tq :)
@Aishalife :just wait sist, but i don't know when? hahahaha
@Nchi : sengaja aku ngangkat cinta dg logika hehehe, disadari atau tidak semakin dewasa usia kita lebih menilai cinta berdasarkan logika :)
4/5/10 09:12
Unknown said…
ngakak baca koment si exort.hehe..bener juga tuh, mas. hi hi hi.....
4/5/10 11:58
Zulfadhli's Family said…
Wow, it's so romantic and beutiful phoem.

Pasti cewenya klepek2 deh kalo dibikinin puisi macam ini :-)
4/5/10 12:09
sehat-mu said…
kehangatannya terasa sampai sini...
keren sobat tulisannya
4/5/10 12:25
Thariq said…
wow.....keren keren keren....
walopun harus baca ni puisi berulang ulang.....
4/5/10 12:54
anyin said…
Enjoy this togetherness...
Don't be wasted...

okeoke, suka sama kalimat diatas^
4/5/10 18:45
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Fanny : untung gak ada tongkat n kacamata item hehehee
@Soesan : tq n entahlah hehehehe
@Sehatmu : tq :)
@Reza : tq btw memang sengaja dibikin spt itu hehehe
@Anyin : syukurlah :)
4/5/10 18:54
Edwin's Personal Blog said…
Just hold my hand. let me know that you feel the same... oh so sweet... :)

Apa kabar, mas Aulawi? Sori ya baru mampir lagi... :)
4/5/10 20:49
septian angga said…
wah puisi cinta ya? ,hhaha
4/5/10 22:24
achen said…
mampir... :-)))))))))))
4/5/10 23:15
ali said…
berkunjung. he
4/5/10 23:16
TUKANG COLONG said…
mengharukan..T_T
*tutup google translate*
5/5/10 03:10
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Edwin's :Tq mas, alhamdulillah baik mas semoga sampeyan juga begitu :)
@Septian : bukan, ini tentang "penegasan" :)
@Achen n buwel : tq brother :)
@Maling : tq hehehe
5/5/10 06:36
neng rara said…
assalamualaikum..
berkunjung dipagi yg indah, bersama puisi indah pula nih..
salam
5/5/10 08:24
Kang Sugeng said…
duuuh... serasa muda kembali ni aku... romantisss...
5/5/10 08:41
Unknown said…
udah jgn pegangan tangan terus. ayo,lepas....mending update dulu. hi hihi.
5/5/10 12:03
Abdul Malik said…
pegang erat tanganku..
apa yg akan kau rasakan??
5/5/10 12:31
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Neng : wa'alaikum salam :)
@Kang sugeng : yg penting jiwa harus muda terus ya kang hehehe
@Fanny : entar nanggung hahahaha
@Abdul malyk: entahlah hehehe
5/5/10 13:49
achen said…
siang mas aulawi...
5/5/10 16:16
buwel said…
nemenin achen, he
5/5/10 16:17
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Achen n buwel : sore brother :)
5/5/10 16:20
None said…
Ohhhhhhhhh indahnya........ pegang tangaku juga, jangan di tarik, ntar masuk ke jurang hahahah
5/5/10 16:53
None said…
maaf ya mas, aku ngga kesini kemaren kemarennya lagi kemarennya lagi, inetku dodol, sekarang aja masih dodol :((
5/5/10 16:54
aulawi ahmad said…
@Inuel : it's ok nduk :) n tq b4 :)
5/5/10 19:40
Elsa said…
kekuatan dari holding hands itu sangat besar lhoo...
7/5/10 13:58
Aulawi Ahmad said…
bener banget El, tak terlukiskan dashyatnya :)
7/5/10 23:30
Nithin RS said…
Your poems are quite touchy ,straight from heart.This poem just portrayed what many guys tell or wish to tell their lovers.
18/6/10 17:57
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Nithin : tq brother :)
6/10/10 19:51
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