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The Door...

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I knocked on the door...
Was said by me greetings...
However did not yet have the answer...

Although my hands were wounded...
Although millions of second were waiting...
Will continue I knocked on your door...
Until being open for me...

Because...
The door was so beautiful...
Could not I turned...
Although not from gold...
Or was adorned with the jewel...

I will not move to the other door...
Before having the assurance...
Before you answered...
Yes or not.

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fanny said…
yes, this is the answer. come in please.
23/11/09 17:34
Aulawi Ahmad said…
oh tq very much...he2
23/11/09 18:19
Zahra Lathifa said…
nice poem bro...my door is always opened for your friendship :) n let me follow your way then...keep happy as always :)
23/11/09 18:52
exort said…
ooh...pintu
ada apakah dibalik pintu...
23/11/09 21:56
elistadyon said…
nite i'm come here and open the door
23/11/09 22:44
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Zahra...hmm finally, tq 4 ur friendship "door" :) i really appreciated that :)
#Exort..dibalik pintu itu ada masa depanku he2222
@Elistadyon..Tq at the same time..mm i asked to drink please wkwkwkwk
23/11/09 23:02
Tom said…
This is very powerful writing. I love it.
24/11/09 01:25
Anonymous said…
a fascinating concept and execution.
24/11/09 05:00
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Tom...Tq Bro
@B.Held...wau really seriously comment :)
24/11/09 09:40
NURA said…
salam friend,,
yes Im waiting,,until being open the door for you.
nyambung ngga siih,,,
24/11/09 10:57
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Nura..salam balik :) wait for me ya, i'll knock ur door he2
24/11/09 11:46
mocca_chi said…
pintu hati, hiihii...

pintu hati sudha terbuka, pintu kessempatan yg belum ^ ^
24/11/09 16:45
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Chi...tau aja hehehe
24/11/09 17:59
Rhien-chan said…
Di balik pintu ada padang bunga dandelion yang luas, kemudian angin membawamu pada seorang gadis yang menunggu seorang teman. Gadis itu adalah... SAYA, wkwkwkwk...!!! XD

Nice poem...!!! :D
24/11/09 18:56
liza said…
nice poem bro.. just knock the door, i'll open it for you and for all my friend..
24/11/09 21:14
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Rien...hmmm tq dah mau menunggu diriku di padang bunga dandelion yg luas, awas kalau itu bukan kamu ya hehehehehe

@Liza..Tq Sist n Tq opened the door for me n all our friend :)
24/11/09 22:38
Rhien-chan said…
xixixixixi
tenang2 gadis itu pasti Karin... :)
26/11/09 04:26
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