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The White Day (In November)


U breathe a word on me…
“Claw me and I’ll claw thee”…
Although I never expected…

I just knew...
As though my feeling has been conveyed…
When U give me the answer…

And…
Everyone doth know…
How the meaning of happiness…

That's what I feel…
Like getting a special gift…
In the white day.



#Synopsis :
Ketulusan adalah suatu perbuatan baik yang tanpa pamrih, meskipun begitu akan terasa sangat indah jika apa yang telah kita lakukan/berikan mendapat balasan yang setimpal. Dan itulah arti kebahagiaan yang sesungguhnya :)

# idioms :
breathe a word on = mengatakan/ memberitahukan
claw me and I'll claw thee = kebaikan dibalas dengan kebaikan

#  NB : 
The white day = tradisi membalas kado/hadiah oleh pasangan/sahabat (usually after valentine)

Comments

Arif Chasan said…
special gift, from the special girl = happiness :D
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Arif : hehehe yah bahagia itu memang sederhana maknanya tapi luarbiasa rasanya :)
Unknown said…
gift from God?
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Fanny : ya gift from God bisa termasuk juga n itu yg utama :)
Dannesya said…
mau mraktekin claw me and i claw you more ah kapan kapan... hahahaha
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Anne : pasti dibales claw juga wkwkwkwkwk
novi rahantan said…
Bahagia itu saat gayung bersambut
kalau saya berpendapat tulus itu perbuatan tanpa pamrih, dan apabila ketulusan yang diberi menerima dengan senang hati dan bisa membantu menyelesaikan masalahnya..itu adalah hal yang menyenangkan...tanpa perlu memikirkan balasan yang akan diterima :-)
Dannesya said…
claw2 an dong... (cakar2an, hahaha)
Like this "kebaikan dibalas kebaikan" :)
Nuranuraniku said…
asalamualaikum
wah sedang merasakan kebahagiaan dibulan November.
alhamdulillah
meaning happiness can only come from the deepest heart of hearts
unikgaul.com said…
your article is nice, very happy to stay and read in here. thanks for sharing :)
good.. i like it.
17Nima said…
entah kenapa selalu membahagiakan membacanya :)
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Nima :tq :) semoga bahagia selalu dtg disaat yg tepat :)
@Com : tq :)
@Baju muslim : yes u r absolutely right :)
@unikgaul : tq :)
@Nura : moga tiap bulan gitu y mbak :)
@Ajeng : pastinya begitu :)
@Blog Hariyanto : yah itu juga inti dari tulisan saya mas :)
@Novi : so sambut n terimalah aku :)
lizafathia said…
reading your poem makes me like flying in the sky. heheheh. romantis sangat awiii
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Liza : tq Liz :) moga ada kesempatan ye naek burung besi sama aku hehehe
kebahagiaan itu adanya didalam hati, dan utk mendapatkan itu tidak mudah, harus ikhlas.

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