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The Hesitancy

U grasping the soil tightly…
As though as part of your soul…

And the tears falling like a rain…
Then flow away…
Like the dust on the air…

Hesitancy hit Ur mind…
To make the best decision…
In the nick of time…

U know and willing…
To take thought for the morrow…

Until someday…
The dream come true…
And U will be back…
To the lovely land.


# Synopsis :
Keraguan adalah awal dari keyakinan :)

#Idioms :
take thought for the morrow = memikirkan masa depan
in the nick of time = tepat pada waktunya

Comments

Unknown said…
selalu suka dgn puisi karya ente
keraguan adalah awal dari keyakinan? benarkah? misalnya apa? jodoh masuk ga? :D
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Ajeng : yes karena pada dasarnya itu bagian dari proses. Apapun itu, jodoh, karir, etc :)
@Fanny : tq :)
dera said…
karya yg luar biasa
Arif Chasan said…
yakin dengan baris "And U will be back" akan jadi kenyataan? :')
NURA said…
asalamualaikum
And the tears falling like a rain…
Then flow away…
Like the dust on the air…
kiasan ini,airmata mengalir seperti debu di udara.
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Nura : tq mbak :)
@Arif : iya, pasti ada masa tuk itu, entah kembali tuk selamanya atau hanya tuk sebentar :)
@wRey : tq :)
Cici Pratama said…
wohohoho, bagus banget karya nya... Like it. Hm... Sering2 kasih idiom yaaaah... Biar belajar dikit2...
17Nima said…
what can i say? i was great poem
Pondok Print said…
bagusnya puisi, jadi pengen ikut belajar ngebuatnya...hihihihi
diNa said…
jadi ikut membayangkan dan meresapi :)
Hesitancy is half of the failures :)
i'm here again :)
Dannesya said…
kaka puisi ini aku banget... galau abis... hahahaha
Dannesya said…
mas ndak ada postingan baru kah??? *tolahtoleh :)

selamat pagi, selamat beraktivitas :D
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Anne : iya lagi sibuk cari duit soalnye hehehe
@Pemilukada : sukses dah buat lombanya :)
@Meidy : tq :)
@Nirna : tq :)
@Cici : tq, selalu pake kok :)
@Bog s Har : hmmm :)

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