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The Shiny Rose

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The shiny rose...
U embraced me...
With the warmth of the love...

U kiss me...
With the tenderness of the love...

However...
I was stabbed by your thorn...
Over and over again...

Made me realised...
If you are not belong to me...

But I will always to take care of you...
So that always shone...
Although that only from far.
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Unknown said…
wah, cinta mati dong namanya..hehehe..
12/11/10 21:28
CommonCyber said…
Wah...
Rela mencinta walau tidak dicinta gitu? Huhuhuhu...

Puisinya "dalem" dah kyk palung lautan terdalam....

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12/11/10 22:23
Bumi Al Fattah said…
Setuju ama CommonCyber.
Maknanya dalemmmmmm.

Hahaha.

jalinan persahabatan Catatan Bumi.
13/11/10 12:08
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@bumi : sedalem apa hehehe Tq dah visit :)
@CC : cintanya masih, tapi pisah :)
@Fanny : gak sampe mati hehehe
13/11/10 13:45
lirik video said…
mannnniiicccceeee
13/11/10 14:12
bintangair said…
ni baru namanya cnta sejati
mencintai walo ga berbalas
ikhlas mencintai
gitu ya mas?
13/11/10 14:47
Coretan Hidup said…
Beruntung sekali si bunga mawar yang bersinar itu dipuja dengan amat setulus hati. Tentu seharusnya si bunga mawar itu mengerti dan membalas cinta sang pangeran kalau ia benar2 peduli.
13/11/10 15:45
nuranuraniku.blogspot.com said…
salam sobat
mencintai ngga harus memiliki ya mas,
walau pisah, tetapi cinta lekat dihati.
14/11/10 11:17
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Nura :betul mbak :)
@CH : disini ceritanya sama2 cinta bro, tapi tidak memiliki :)
@Bintang : sama2 cinta tapi tidak memiliki :)
@Lirik : piye kabare bro :)
14/11/10 12:02
BABY DIJA said…
Om...
sorry ya Om...
Dija baru jalan jalan kesini
habisnya, Tante Elsa diajak blogwalking selalu sibuk melulu. menyebalkan tuh Tante Elsa...

gimana Om kabarnya???
14/11/10 12:08
Elsa said…
kasih tak sampai???
terpisah oleh apa nih? hehehe
tragis bener kisahnya
tapi emang banyak yang mengalaminya juga

seperti slogan lama yang hampir kadaluarsa itu
mencintai tak harus memiliki

Halah

hahahahahhaa
14/11/10 12:10
exort said…
ya... emang ga semua cinta itu dapat dimiliki
14/11/10 13:38
Teras Info said…
Dalem deh.....
cita-cinta....banyak makan dari cinta itu ya...he..he..
14/11/10 15:52
catatan kecilku said…
Mencintai tak harus memiliki... mana tahan... hehehe
14/11/10 21:47
the others.... said…
Aku membayangkan jika apa yg tertulis dlm puisi diatas aku alami. Sanggupkah aku..?!
14/11/10 21:48
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@The others : pait yg jelas mbak :)
@CK : makanya skrg dibalik mbak, memiliki tak harus cinta hehehe
@Teras info : hehehe kenyang pastinya
@Exort : dibalik aja bro :)
@Elsa : hehehe karna dia statusnya dah forbidden :)
@Dija : aku baik aj Dija, moga Dija jg begitu ya :)
15/11/10 09:51
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