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The heart painting

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When the sun came...
Welcomed the beautiful morning...
Washed dew...
In the wet leaves...

Like your smile...
The faithful greet me ...
Made me be enchanted...
Without could speak...

Your smile indeed the difference...
Be full of the sincerity...
The sincerity of a woman...
That loved a man...

Now that smile...
Not for me anymore...
Disappears...
Like at dusk...
That changed the night...

The smile...
Only became the heart painting...
Still whines up to now...
Although still was tomorrow...
And the same sun.
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Darin said…
beautiful poem..as usually ^_^
great weekend friend.
27/3/10 12:00
aura keyboard said…
Puisi yang indah! Senyuman membuat kebahagiaan untuk diri sendiri dan orang yang ada disekitar kita!
27/3/10 12:01
Dimas said…
hanya bisa menikmati...
27/3/10 12:13
Anonymous said…
Semoga senyum cerahnya sang surya, memberi suasana tersendiri buat kita setiap hari...
27/3/10 12:28
non inge said…
kereeeeeen... >.<

have a nice weekend ^^
27/3/10 12:45
Unknown said…
ya sudah, nih aku kasih senyum deh utk gantiin senyum yg hilang itu. hehhehe....
27/3/10 13:23
Ajeng said…
Jadi ingat lagunya MLTR.. (enggak nyambung ya?)
27/3/10 16:11
exort said…
jadi pingin liat senyumnya itu
27/3/10 16:18
a-chen said…
tersenyum... :-)
27/3/10 16:51
buwel said…
Nice poems... :-)
27/3/10 16:51
fitRi said…
smile...:) :)
27/3/10 18:28
@minumino said…
just find another smile,haha
27/3/10 18:55
fai_cong said…
hihi...
prikitiw...
:D
27/3/10 19:04
elok langita said…
"The smile...
Only became the heart painting..."

not just become the heart painting but the smile is life
27/3/10 19:25
Ranny said…
duhh ce yang inspired neh puisi mantap kali lah ^^

slalu mantap dah puisi puisi bang aulawi ^^

met malming
27/3/10 21:20
Kang Sugeng said…
yes yes yes... ra patek mudeng akuw...
27/3/10 21:46
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Darin :tq n greet weekend too :)
@aura :tq :)
@Dimas :tq :)
@Lilah : amin :)
@inge : tq, n met wiken juga :)
@Fanny :tq :)
@Exort : hehehe
@ajeng : lagunya siapa tuh mbak hehehe
@achen :bales senyum :)
@Buwel : tq :)
@Fitri : tq :)
@Mino :iya,kan nungguin kamu :)
@Fai :prikitiw balik hehehe
@Elok :yes u right, but that words conection with paragraph three "now that smile not for me anymore, disappears"... :)
@Ranny :bisa aj :) tq b4 n met malming juga :)
27/3/10 21:56
Rahad Adjars said…
puisinya bagus...
27/3/10 22:08
ali afif said…
senyum lagi... hiihihi
27/3/10 23:30
liza said…
apa kabar sahabatku? semoga hari libur yang indah ini dapat menghilangkan lelah setelah seminggu bekerja. selamat berakhir pekan

salam
Liza
28/3/10 08:42
richo said…
cie cie..... hatimu pinter melukis brarti bro heheh
28/3/10 10:20
inuel said…
senyumku aja deh yang buat mas, :D, lupakan senyumnya ketika dia mulai menggoreskan luka :),

maaf telat datang hehe
28/3/10 11:06
Batzsurya said…
always smile..nice poem..
28/3/10 11:33
si ublik said…
you know I can't smile without u
can't smile without u
garry manillow >
btw I got a tag 4 u, please pick it up from my blog. thanks
28/3/10 12:41
UMS EDUKASI RSBI said…
Now that smile...
for me too?? he..he..
28/3/10 16:24
dewi said…
coming n smile with u... my friend....hope not only become heart painting
28/3/10 18:44
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Kang sugen : tq kang :)
@Rahad : tq :)
@Achen : jhiaa
@Liza : tq liz :)
@Richo : hehehe
@Inuel : tq nul :)
@Batz : tq :)
@Rossi : hehehe malah nyanyi :) tq b4 :)
@UMS : of course :)
@Dewi : tq, i hope so :)
28/3/10 19:29
fanny said…
met hari minggu. bawain kue putu
28/3/10 20:31
rose said…
nice poem... ^^ suka bikin puisi juga yaa.. salam kenal dari rose...^^
28/3/10 20:35
rose said…
komen rose hilang??
:-( salam kenal sobat...^^
28/3/10 20:36
trisnok said…
nice poetry....keep it up :D
28/3/10 21:38
bintang said…
komen sambil senyum maniezz
menyapa mas aulawi melewati detik minggu untuk berganti senin
hehheh
28/3/10 21:55
Yolizz said…
hohohoho... manteeeppp deehh... a smile for u... :)
28/3/10 23:12
Kristanto-wds said…
keren puisinya ato post nya.... mantap mantap....

Tersenyum ini....
29/3/10 01:19
Ninda Rahadi said…
I like your smile too... ehehe
29/3/10 07:49
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Fanny : horee kue putu, tq ya :)
@Rose : tq, hanya iseng aja n makasih kjgn balesannya :)
@Trisnok : tq :)
@Bintang : tq jadi semangat lagi nih berkat senyummu :)
@Yolizz :tq senyuman manisnya :)
@ Kris : tq :)
@Anyin : hehehe :)
29/3/10 09:43
ola said…
nice poem nice poem :P
29/3/10 11:44
NURA said…
salam friend
the smile,,,,,
I like smile,, coz your smile too...
29/3/10 11:56
nyunz said…
mas.. mas.. mas.. good night :D
29/3/10 11:58
Aulawi Ahmad said…
@Ola : hehehe tq :p
@Nura : tq mbak :)
@Nyunz : gud nite too hihihi
29/3/10 14:26
Thariq said…
sabar ya mas....semoga senyumannya tidak mebuatmu senyum senyum sndiri...ntar dikira orang...mmmm....hehehe...bcanda ding..
30/3/10 07:48
Aulawi Ahmad said…
nih aja lagi ketawa sendiri hahahahha
30/3/10 10:16
Elsa said…
we are all live under the same sun.
13/4/10 15:06
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