The wind blew the foliage...
That still was wet by dew...
Welcomed the morning in December...
The morning was becoming more beautiful ...
When gazing at your face...
That gave the warmth...
In the almost frozen feeling...
Because of the longing...
That was kept by the reality...
Hopefully not just a moment...
This most beautiful gift...
Not only gave hope...
That had not been realised.
With this poem I wanna tq for Rezka that gave me this award, I'm really appreciated that :) (Sorry if not follow the rules)
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That's a good poem.
By the way, congrats for the award.
You deserve it.
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
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Selamat buat awardnya mas.
^^
wah..apa-apa lgsg dibikin poem..
mantap/
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صَلَّى اللّهُ عَلَى مُحَمَّد – صَلَّى الله عَلَيْهِ وَسَلَّم
Salam Sobat CC
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Eh mas, itu ada tulisan mmaf gak ngikutin rules,,,
emg rulesnya apaan?
Hayoo..
^^
habis memandang wajahku ya??? hehehehe..
suka bgt sama puisi ini...:)
beautiful write...i loved your poems....concise but on the target....amazing writes...
puisi khusus buat yg memberi award ya? heheheh~ selamat atas awardnya ya
dan selamat menyambut bulan di penghujung tahun ^^
@Clara : hahaha bolehlah klu dia mau hehehe :)
@TFP : tq bro :)
@CC : ntu rulenye byk :) yg penting dipajang aja deh :)
@ABF : mantaf dah :)
@Fitri : iya :) tq ye :)
@Multibrand : tq :)
apapun kreatifnya itu merupakan hal yang indah di tulis dengan kejujuran
keren awardnya..sip deh
selamat ya, awardnya bagus eui
wow award nya elegant banget....
Awardnya unik... selamat ya...
Eng ing eng... wajah siapakah itu..? ^_^
*kedip2 mata*
bingung memaknai puisinya...
bener bener masih bingung nih
@Elsa : intinya kehadiran seseorang (meski hanya lewat tatapan) namun telah mencairkan hati yg hampir beku karena kerinduan yg tertahan oleh kenyataan :)
@CK & The other : orgnya disini kok mbak hehehe
@Exort : tq :)
@Fanny : tq :)
@Bintang : tq:)
@Kawanlamo : menulis puisi memang dari hati :)
salam sobat
selamat atas AWARD kerennya,
sip banget yang dibawah ini;
Hopefully not just a moment...
This most beautiful gift...
Not only gave hope...
That had not been realised.
salam sobat...keren abis...postingannya
@Ali : tq :)
@Nura : tq mbak, kita selalu berharap harapan tuk menjadi kenyataan :)
Wah, awardnya cantik banget. Selamat ya. Semoga semakin semangat ngeblog nya
nggak tau kenapa aku suka banget bait terakhir ituh >.<
selamat buat awardnya ^^
@Inge : mungkin karn kita sering berharap spt itu :)
@CH : ewod bkn skdr tuk motivasi tapi lbh sbg tanda persahabatan :)
Wah awardx bagus .. Congratz ya ! :)
Wah wah wah, lagi ga mudeng euy hari ini karena kangen berat ama laki. jadi puisinya belom bisa dicerna dengan baik :-)
Btw selamat yah Bang atas awardnya
Soesan : hehe tq :)
Ajeng : tq :)
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