Not just a moment

The wind blew the foliage...
That still was wet by dew...
Welcomed the morning in December...

The morning was becoming more beautiful ...
When gazing at your face...

That gave the warmth...
In the almost frozen feeling...
Because of the longing...
That was kept by the reality...

Hopefully not just a moment...
This most beautiful gift...
Not only gave hope...
That had not been realised.


With this poem I wanna tq for Rezka that gave me this award, I'm really appreciated that :) (Sorry if not follow the rules)

24 comments:

Multibrand said...

That's a good poem.

By the way, congrats for the award.
You deserve it.

Ahmad Bumi Fattah said...

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
——
Selamat buat awardnya mas.
^^

wah..apa-apa lgsg dibikin poem..
mantap/
——

صَلَّى اللّهُ عَلَى مُحَمَّد – صَلَّى الله عَلَيْهِ وَسَلَّم

Common Cyber said...

Salam Sobat CC
********************

Eh mas, itu ada tulisan mmaf gak ngikutin rules,,,

emg rulesnya apaan?

Hayoo..

^^

fitRi said...

habis memandang wajahku ya??? hehehehe..
suka bgt sama puisi ini...:)

The Fallen Poet said...

beautiful write...i loved your poems....concise but on the target....amazing writes...

Clara Canceriana said...

puisi khusus buat yg memberi award ya? heheheh~ selamat atas awardnya ya
dan selamat menyambut bulan di penghujung tahun ^^

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Clara : hahaha bolehlah klu dia mau hehehe :)
@TFP : tq bro :)
@CC : ntu rulenye byk :) yg penting dipajang aja deh :)
@ABF : mantaf dah :)
@Fitri : iya :) tq ye :)
@Multibrand : tq :)

kawanlama95 said...

apapun kreatifnya itu merupakan hal yang indah di tulis dengan kejujuran

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

keren awardnya..sip deh

exort said...

selamat ya, awardnya bagus eui

bintangair said...

wow award nya elegant banget....

the other said...

Awardnya unik... selamat ya...

catatan kecilku said...

Eng ing eng... wajah siapakah itu..? ^_^
*kedip2 mata*

Elsa said...

bingung memaknai puisinya...

bener bener masih bingung nih

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Elsa : intinya kehadiran seseorang (meski hanya lewat tatapan) namun telah mencairkan hati yg hampir beku karena kerinduan yg tertahan oleh kenyataan :)
@CK & The other : orgnya disini kok mbak hehehe
@Exort : tq :)
@Fanny : tq :)
@Bintang : tq:)
@Kawanlamo : menulis puisi memang dari hati :)

NURA said...

salam sobat
selamat atas AWARD kerennya,
sip banget yang dibawah ini;
Hopefully not just a moment...
This most beautiful gift...
Not only gave hope...
That had not been realised.

ali said...

salam sobat...keren abis...postingannya

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Ali : tq :)
@Nura : tq mbak, kita selalu berharap harapan tuk menjadi kenyataan :)

CORETAN HIDUP said...

Wah, awardnya cantik banget. Selamat ya. Semoga semakin semangat ngeblog nya

inge / cyber dreamer said...

nggak tau kenapa aku suka banget bait terakhir ituh >.<

selamat buat awardnya ^^

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Inge : mungkin karn kita sering berharap spt itu :)
@CH : ewod bkn skdr tuk motivasi tapi lbh sbg tanda persahabatan :)

Ajeng Sari Rahayu said...

Wah awardx bagus .. Congratz ya ! :)

Zulfadhli's Family said...

Wah wah wah, lagi ga mudeng euy hari ini karena kangen berat ama laki. jadi puisinya belom bisa dicerna dengan baik :-)

Btw selamat yah Bang atas awardnya

Aulawi Ahmad said...

Soesan : hehe tq :)
Ajeng : tq :)

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