My Jasmine.....

My jasmine...
Give me thy fragrant...
In order to become my life breath...
And let me touch you...
To share the warmth...

My jasmine...
White was calming for the heart...
Flowed soft removed restless...
Lighted the feeling that became dark...

My jasmine...
You indeed not roses...
It was pretty that the form...
However thorny...

You also not the orchid...
That various colours...
But was thirsty for attention...

You were the sincerity...
That could not be compared...

My jasmine...
Blossomed beside me...
Together...
Welcomed the morning sun...
To the end of later.

15 comments:

Sang Cerpenis bercerita said...

duh, manis bgt. siapa tuh yg jadi Jasminenya? bisa klepek2 deh baca puisimu. hahahhha...

neng rara said...

assalamualaikum....
menarik sekali, blognya.
puisinya juga ok.
my jasmine, keponakan sy juga namanya yasmin.sama ya?ijin follow yap?
salam

mocca_chi said...

lama lama semua isi taman pindah kemari wkwkwk

aku suka bau melati, harum dan menenangkannn

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Fanny...Tq, puisi ini memang untuk seseorang yang telah memutihkan kelamnya rasa di hati..he22
@Neng_rara...Wa'alaikum sallam...tq praise n follow nya he2,btw salam buat ponakannya, bolehlah puisi ini kupersembahkan utk dirinya :)

baili said...

hello ,wow its wonderful poem i jut remembered the beautiful plant of jasmine in my house of village and i used to watch and write about in same poetic way thanks for sharing take care

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Mocca_Chi...pinginnya tak masukin semua, tapi gak muat wkwkwkwk...nih melatinya untukmu biar kamu lebih tenang :)

@Baili..Tq, glad if could revealed memories about ur village :)...n Tq 4share too :)

NURA said...

salam sobat
puisinya untuk sang pujaan hati ya,,
si Jasmine,,,
siip banget..

salam kenal ya,,
saya sudah follow nich ya,,

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Nura..Tq, jasmine cuma symbol aj :) coz she's sincere like jasmine he2..n salam kenal balik sobat :)

Rita Susanti said...

Hi, nice to visit your blog...

Hmm, I think this poem can touch every heart that read. Wish your jasmine will blossome beside you and together until the end of time...

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Rita..Tq 4 visit n Tq 4 ur wish..amin :)

exort said...

Waduh ga nyangka, background foto profilnya MU tp bisa merangkai kata2 puitis yg manis nan romantis
Ijin follow ya..siapa tau puisinya bisa dipinjem buat ngerayu cewe hehehehe

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Exort...He2 MU team favoritku Bro, btw Tq praise n follow nya :) boleh2 aj siapa tau berhasil he2

alijaini said...

Aaarggh..logat inggrisku ancur.my jasmine where are you..? Ha ha

AISHALIFE-LINE said...

kunjungan balik.wah...yang mana nih jasminenya?hehehe.nice poem.makasih kunjungannya ya.

Aulawi Ahmad said...

@Alijaini...Tq dah mampir :), jasminenya lagi ngambek nih hehehe
@Aisha...Tq silaturahminya, Jasmine lagi mikirin nerima apa nggak cintaku hahahaha

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